Oh, wonderful. The bus is late again. I just love standing in the rain for twenty minutes.
7th grade · English Language Arts · Unit 2 of 13
Tone & Mood
How writing feels and sounds
What your child practices
Telling the writer's attitude (tone) apart from the reader's feeling (mood), and seeing how word choice and connotation shape both.
Alaska content standards learning standard: RL.7.4; L.7.5 · tone and mood
How we explain it
Children can open this short lesson before they practice.
- Tone is the writer’s attitude toward the subject: enthusiastic, nostalgic, objective, sarcastic.
- Mood is the feeling the reader gets: tense, peaceful, gloomy, cheerful.
- Look at word choice and connotation. Words like creaked and shadows build a tense mood.
Example: “I still remember those summer evenings at the lake. Those were the best days.” What is the tone? The writer is looking back fondly at the past. Warm longing for the past is nostalgia. Answer: Nostalgic
Tone & Mood in Alaska
In the Alaska content standards, this is unit 2 of 13 in 7th grade English Language Arts, after Literary Devices and before Persuasive Power.
Gradelings describes a child's practice on this unit as Beginning, Approaching, Meeting or Exceeding (Four practice steps). That reflects practice, not a report-card mark: the teacher decides the mark.
- 7th grade guide for Alaska parents
- Printable 7th grade English Language Arts sheet
- Alaska report cards explained
Source: Alaska Department of Education and Early Development
Sample questions
A taste of this unit. In the app, questions change every time and get easier or harder to match your child.
Question 1
Sort the words by connotation. Does each word sound positive or negative?
Sort into: 👍 Positive · 👎 Negative
- 🐂stubborn
- 🎯determined
- 😤arrogant
- 🔍curious
- 🌱youthful
- 👃nosy
👍 Positive: determined, curious, youthful · 👎 Negative: stubborn, arrogant, nosy
Hint: Pairs like confident/arrogant mean almost the same thing, but one is a compliment and one is a put-down.
Question 2
Which description of the same person sounds the most admiring?
- Lena is determined and never gives up on an idea.
- Lena is pushy about her ideas.
- Lena is stubborn and never lets go of an idea.
- Lena is obsessed with her own ideas.
Lena is determined and never gives up on an idea.
Hint: Compare the describing words: determined, stubborn, pushy, obsessed. Which one is a compliment?
Question 3
A story describes a long, hard winter. Which final sentence would leave readers feeling most hopeful?
- Everyone stayed inside, staring at the gray sky.
- The snow kept falling, and no one remembered what spring looked like.
- The furnace rattled once and went silent.
- On the windowsill, the first green shoot pushed up through the soil.
On the windowsill, the first green shoot pushed up through the soil.
Hint: Which detail suggests that something new is beginning?
Question 4
Which word best describes the writer's tone?
- Joyful
- Fearful
- Sincere
- Sarcastic
Sarcastic
Hint: Does the writer really love standing in the rain? Saying the opposite of what you mean, with an edge, is sarcasm.
Question 5
Which word best describes the mood of this passage?
The lake was still. A loon called once across the water, and the last light of evening turned the clouds pink.
- Frantic
- Angry
- Peaceful
- Silly
Peaceful
Hint: Still water, one quiet call, soft pink light... The details are calm and gentle.
Question 6
Which word best describes the writer's tone?
I still remember the summer we built the treehouse: the long afternoons, the sticky lemonade, the feeling that summer would never end. I miss those days.
- Angry
- Sarcastic
- Nostalgic
- Fearful
Nostalgic
Hint: The writer looks back fondly and misses the past. That longing is called nostalgia.