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7th grade · English Language Arts · Unit 2 of 13
Tone & Mood
How writing feels and sounds
What your child practices
Telling the writer's attitude (tone) apart from the reader's feeling (mood), and seeing how word choice and connotation shape both.
Minnesota K-12 Academic Standards benchmark: 7.1.8.2; 7.2.3.2 · how word choice sets tone, and keeping voice and tone consistent
How we explain it
Children can open this short lesson before they practice.
- Tone is the writer’s attitude toward the subject: enthusiastic, nostalgic, objective, sarcastic.
- Mood is the feeling the reader gets: tense, peaceful, gloomy, cheerful.
- Look at word choice and connotation. Words like creaked and shadows build a tense mood.
Example: “I still remember those summer evenings at the lake. Those were the best days.” What is the tone? The writer is looking back fondly at the past. Warm longing for the past is nostalgia. Answer: Nostalgic
Tone & Mood in Minnesota
In the Minnesota K-12 Academic Standards, this is unit 2 of 13 in 7th grade English Language Arts, after Literary Devices and before Persuasive Power.
Gradelings describes a child's practice on this unit as Beginning, Approaching, Meeting or Exceeding (Four practice steps). That reflects practice, not a report-card mark: the teacher decides the mark.
Sample questions
A taste of this unit. In the app, questions change every time and get easier or harder to match your child.
Question 1
Which description of the same person sounds the most admiring?
- Lena is pushy about her ideas.
- Lena is determined and never gives up on an idea.
- Lena is stubborn and never lets go of an idea.
- Lena is obsessed with her own ideas.
Lena is determined and never gives up on an idea.
Hint: Compare the describing words: determined, stubborn, pushy, obsessed. Which one is a compliment?
Question 2
Which word best describes the writer's tone?
- Nostalgic
- Sarcastic
- Urgent
- Playful
Urgent
Hint: Words like “carefully” and “right away” show the writer wants quick, serious action.
Question 3
Sort the words by connotation. Does each word sound positive or negative?
Sort into: 👍 Positive · 👎 Negative
- 🌱youthful
- 🐂stubborn
- 🍼childish
- 🔒stingy
- 🔍curious
- 😌relaxed
👍 Positive: youthful, curious, relaxed · 👎 Negative: stubborn, childish, stingy
Hint: Pairs like confident/arrogant mean almost the same thing, but one is a compliment and one is a put-down.
Question 4
Which sentence has the most formal tone?
- We respectfully request that the meeting be moved to Thursday.
- Can we move the meeting? Thursday's way better.
- Thursday, yeah? Let's just do that.
- Ugh, fine, Thursday works, I guess.
We respectfully request that the meeting be moved to Thursday.
Hint: Formal writing avoids slang and contractions and sounds polite and serious.
Question 5
Which word best describes the writer's tone?
My little brother's idea of “helping” in the kitchen is eating the chocolate chips before they reach the bowl. So far, he has helped with zero cookies and about four hundred chocolate chips.
- Humorous
- Formal
- Tragic
- Furious
Humorous
Hint: The writer exaggerates and jokes about the “help.” What tone does that create?
Question 6
Which word has the most negative connotation?
- stingy
- economical
- frugal
- thrifty
stingy
Hint: All four describe someone careful with money. Which one sounds like an insult?