The Science Fair
I carried my volcano model carefully down the hall. My hands were shaking, and I worried that the baking soda would spill before the judges arrived.
7th grade · English Language Arts · Unit 9 of 13
First, second and third person
Telling first, second and third person apart, finding the clues, and imagining how a different narrator would change the story.
Alabama Course of Study content standard: 7.3 · first, second and third person
Children can open this short lesson before they practice.
Example: “You step into the cave. Your flashlight flickers.” What point of view is this? The story speaks to the reader directly. It uses you and your. Answer: second person
In the Alabama Course of Study, this is unit 9 of 13 in 7th grade English Language Arts, after Punctuation Power and before Roots & Word Parts.
Gradelings describes a child's practice on this unit as Beginning, Approaching, Meeting or Exceeding (Four practice steps). That reflects practice, not a report-card mark: the teacher decides the mark.
A taste of this unit. In the app, questions change every time and get easier or harder to match your child.
Question 1
What does the reader learn about the narrator?
I carried my volcano model carefully down the hall. My hands were shaking, and I worried that the baking soda would spill before the judges arrived.
The narrator is nervous.
Hint: Shaking hands and worry show how the narrator feels.
Question 2
What point of view is this?
I carried my volcano model carefully down the hall. My hands were shaking, and I worried that the baking soda would spill before the judges arrived.
first person
Hint: The narrator says I and my.
Question 3
How does second person affect the reader?
You open your suitcase and stare at it. You have only an hour before the car arrives. You fold your jacket and wonder what you are forgetting.
It makes the reader feel part of the story.
Hint: The reader is addressed directly.
Question 4
Which sentence is written in second person?
You hear a strange sound behind the door.
Hint: Look for you.
Question 5
What point of view is this?
You open your suitcase and stare at it. You have only an hour before the car arrives. You fold your jacket and wonder what you are forgetting.
second person
Hint: The narrator speaks to you.
Question 6
How does first person help readers connect with a narrator?
They hear the narrator's own voice and feelings.
Hint: First person is the narrator's own telling.