7th grade · English Language Arts · Unit 16 of 20
Word Choice & Voice
Choose words and tone for your audience
What your child practices
Children practice choosing precise, descriptive and subject-specific words, and matching tone, sentence style and personal voice to the audience and purpose.
New York State Learning Standards learning standard: 7L6; 7SL6 · precise and subject-specific words, voice and formal or informal tone
How we explain it
Children can open this short lesson before they practice.
- Pick precise words: delicious instead of nice, whispered instead of said.
- Match your tone to the audience: warm and respectful for a thank-you note, casual for a friend.
- Use subject words in reports and simple words in casual stories.
Example: Which word replaces “said” to show a quiet voice: shouted, whispered or answered? You need a word that means speaking softly. Whispered means speaking very quietly. Answer: whispered
Word Choice & Voice in New York
In the New York State Learning Standards, this is unit 16 of 20 in 7th grade English Language Arts, after Plan & Organize Writing and before Posters & Presentations.
Gradelings describes a child's practice on this unit as Beginning, Approaching, Meeting or Exceeding (Four practice steps). That reflects practice, not a report-card mark: the teacher decides the mark.
Sample questions
A taste of this unit. In the app, questions change every time and get easier or harder to match your child.
Question 1
A persuasive speech for a skate park should use…
- a joke in every sentence
- no reasons
- a confident tone with strong reasons
- a bored tone
a confident tone with strong reasons
Hint: Tone should fit the purpose.
Question 2
Which word is a discipline-specific word in science?
- habitat
- thing
- very
- pretty
habitat
Hint: Subject words are used in one area of study.
Question 3
Which change best improves the tone of “Give me your pencil now”?
- I need it, give it.
- May I please borrow your pencil?
- Hurry up.
- Pencil.
May I please borrow your pencil?
Hint: Polite words change the tone.
Question 4
A writer says “I have a lot of feelings about the first snow.” To add voice and detail, they could add…
- a specific memory or image
- a longer title
- a heading
- more punctuation
a specific memory or image
Hint: Details show feelings.
Question 5
Which word is the most precise replacement for “nice” in “a nice meal”?
- okay
- delicious
- good
- fine
delicious
Hint: Pick the word with the strongest, most exact picture.
Question 6
Which is the best way to find a more exact word?
- Use a rhyme
- Choose the first word you see
- Pick any long word
- Use a thesaurus and check the meaning in a dictionary
Use a thesaurus and check the meaning in a dictionary
Hint: Check the shades of meaning before swapping.